Character Profiles:
Detective (Bishop): Suit, long coat, single, cold
personality,
2nd Detective (Reece Youngs): Conflicts opposite
number, sarcastic, similar appearance/attitude, social opposites
Killer: Blood stained shirt, tools in garage, Jar of hearts
in garage, scruffy dress code.
Setting the scene: Old garage (with dark filter applied)
body possibly in a woodlands/field.
Keeping the city unknown, getting a high up angle view of
the woodland/field where the body is kept.
Script:
Fade in
Exterior. Unknown forest- late morning.
Closes into a crime scene, Detective Youngs is on the scene
and Bishop is just arriving. There is a body on the floor with deep gashes
around the chest and heart.
Bishop: What we got?
Youngs: Dead body.
(With a grin on his face)
(With a grin on his face)
Bishop: (slowly loosing temper)…I’ll ask again, what have we got Youngs?
Youngs: Young male, charged for possession of illegal
substances 3 months ago, probably looking for somewhere to get high, but
obviously hit a low last night.
Stage direction: Bishop looks up with a disgusted look.
Stage direction: Bishop looks up with a disgusted look.
Bishop:(angrily) Christ sake Youngs, you don’t speak ill of the dead.
Stage direction: Youngs flails his arms in defence of his comment.
Stage direction: Youngs flails his arms in defence of his comment.
Youngs: But sir he was a low life drug dealer, if anything
we've been done a favour.
Bishop: That may be the case, but think about this. That man
has a family, I can’t go and tell his mother, or wife and children that their
Husband, son or father has been killed but it’s not important. There are
consequences to each and every action.
Youngs: Whatever.
(Bishop sighs)
Bishop: (Snaps) What was that Detective Youngs?
Youngs:(Sarcastically) Nothing Sir
Bishop:Lets let forensics start processing some of this before any evidence deteriorates.
Stage direction:bishop walks past the camera out of the scene.
Youngs: Probably best.
Stage direction: Takes a final note about the crime scene.
Fade out
END OF SCENE
(Bishop sighs)
Bishop: (Snaps) What was that Detective Youngs?
Youngs:(Sarcastically) Nothing Sir
Bishop:Lets let forensics start processing some of this before any evidence deteriorates.
Stage direction:bishop walks past the camera out of the scene.
Youngs: Probably best.
Stage direction: Takes a final note about the crime scene.
Fade out
END OF SCENE
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